I really like this flat plan. It has just the right amount of colour as it isn't too overwhelming. The flat plan looks like there is little colour however the artist will be wearing the same colours and so it will look better when it is finally done.
I used my focus group's feedback on the unconventional layout of the double page spread to help me decide on the final layout. I really like it, it looks clean and nice and I think that the reader will like it.
The focus group said that you should always have the title of the article at the top of the page so that is what I have done here. I don't have anything I need to improve on, I think. I like the colours, layout and the images.
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